really sick edit.
rails were great, he's got a good variety of tricks. although for the first 1/3 of the edit the afterbang was a little excessively forced, but as the edit progressed his style became more and more natural.
as for jumps, not bad, hitting some big jumps and throwing down. even for living in IL it still seems he rips jumps. although the tricks and the jumps themselves were sick, he wasn't quite as good there. try to hold the grab more and just stay smoother.
as for the filming, that was lacking a bit. could be a little shaky at times, and didn't have the best angles. also try to get some more follow cams in there.
all in all pretty sick edit, and hopefully i was a little helpful in some way.