Second Edit

Get some new music, change up the shots a bit, your titles took way too long, the beginning was super slow; leave out the car shots... ooh, and warn us that it's a tramp video. Tramps are fun, but better not shared with the internet. Oooh, and do some wall flips, they're really easy on the tramp.

thanks dick... seriously ha. whats wrong with the music? what other shots would you get? and we did some other wall flips lask week but I havent made any edit yet.. as far as it being a tramp edit.. I figured you guys could figure it out by the image preview being a kid on a tramp

i actually found it really fun to watch, although the transitions between shots are a bit slow.

i want to jump on a trampoline soooooooo bad right now.

i didnt find the song to bad, other than it gets a good bit of play. Intro and transitions were the only negative aspects to it, prolonged. Other than that, DAMN i want to TRAMP some trampolines haha, looks like you had a lot of fun

ya I thought the into was too long but left it anyway.. and is dl actually popular? because I have only heard  him in one clip in LSS.. here I was thinking he wasnt popular at all.. especially after listening to a lot of what he says in all his songs..

dont know what your talking about in terms of "specially after listening to a lot of what he says in all his songs" but DL fairly well know especially in TO haha 416

idono Ive just heard many times him not so much complaining but stating that he doesnt have the money or the records he wants so I figure he isnt that popular.. and where the hell is TO? Toronto?

not sure what song but he says something along the lines of I dont have the money to match the skill..

haha not sure what song your talking about, but yes Toronto

that switch rodeo or what ever jon did into the foam pit was sick

good song

+ karma for responses.. good or bad

"Out of the Box" was used for Sammy Carlson's seg in Ski Porn, and he also used 2 other DL songs in his JOSS video and his seg in Seven Sunny Days.  Also, "Live in My Element" was used in Realtime in the last segment. DL is pretty well known.  I liked the tricks in the video, but the shots got kind of repetitive.  Also, you should put the titles at the end, or at least shorten them up to 10 seconds or so.  The double-flips looked pretty cool, but I think that you guys should work on some flatspins and more cork and bio spins, instead of flips so much.  Overall, a good start, but I think you should mix it up a little in the next edit.  If you make a new edit, post it up here so we can compare to the original and see what we liked and what we didn't.

Yeah, DL is pretty commonplace in ski videos, so if you're going to use his music, make it a song that hasn't been used in any/at least any "famous" edits.  As for shots, the car shots at the beginning were overused a bit and didn't give us a sense of where you went.  If you had gotten the tramp place name in that shot, maybe it could've been used almost as much as it was.  The shots inside the car were good, but again, I saw them once, don't have to see them again, no matter how handsome they are or what expressions they're making (no homo).  The titles were a bit long, but I really liked the pan you did from high up to show us the place.  That was nice.  I try to avoid big titles like that because they block the video, so I couldnt see the place as well as I could with a regular title.  Tramp shots are tough to differ, because a tramp place is so bland and "fake."  All you can really do is change angles. 

What I like to do when I edit is showcase the mood of the session.  If it was intense, use intense music (not like hardcore screamo, but darker, more serious rap and such).  If it was a good time with the buddies, then happy music.  I find that since basically all our sessions are happy (claim, I know) I like to make my edits quick with lots of jump cuts to a happy/quick beats.  It makes them more fun to watch and keeps the viewer entertained.

Hope this helps man.  It took me like 10 minutes to write...Ok well maybe not ten, but more like 6-7.  Keep working at it dude, and btw, your footage looked really good.  You might also want to do some shots without the fisheye...maybe you did, I'm not sure.  Just some thoughts though.  :)

ha thanks guys, to be honest I had never heard of him and cant really find that much of him online so I figured he wasnt popular.. and to the guy who said more flat spins and corks, we did some stuff but I mean we can do that on a normal tramp so when we get to use these we like to throw crazy doubles.. ( you should see this weeks doubles.. yes claim.) and thanks for the feedback on titles.. and to blondie, ya I get what your saying but I couldnt find a good song for the edit, so I just went with this.. didnt thrill me but it worked enough.


but thanks for the suggestions
+ karma to everyone.. even the first guy.

oh also.. what made me think he wasnt popular or had money an all that was the song keep it movin'.. he says a few times he wished he had all day radio play and wished he had the power to buy a mercedes..

Word dude, thanks.  This is his newer album (I think) that Silence the Aussie posted up in the Music cult. 

http://music.brainwash.net.ru/jnk/DL_Incognito-A_Captured_Moment_In_Time-2008-C4.zip

I've used 1-2 songs I think, but other than that I haven't heard these anywhere.  He's really dope and good for skiing, but its tough when everyone already knows him...

it is his newer album, but I already got it off another site but thanks man.. and ya Im actually kinda mad people know him ha..

yah hes one of those you think your the only one to listen to him haha....well i think he going to keep growing for a while, hes not super big, but no doubt in time he will....

I cant say Ive ever liked them that much.. I have a lot of their cds but they werent ever my favorite..

nice job man. thats a way sick edit

bump

i liked the editing....
but the first guy is what i like to refer to as a pencil

the first guy was sick ahah. that was the most entertaining tramp edit ive ever seeen...