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Good job. There were a few things though:
1. Cut shots didn't feel right
2. Sometimes, especially on the B Roll, it didn't flow well (for example you cut an entire body at the beginning.)
Honestly, half the edit was REALLY good and half was just eh, maybe its because you edited in a rush. IDK but good job