Michael Ashworth // The Streets of Lake Oswego - Edit Critique

Would try making it a bit more creative and interesting. It get's a bit boring just looking at the skier from the same angle all the time. Also, try grading the colors, so they don't look so bleached out. I noticed some of the clips were shot under bad weather conditions with dull light, so a bit color grading in Post would make it more interesting. Other than that, it's a good urban edit(taking in consideration that it is your first one). The song felt somewhat repetitive(IMO), but then of course we mustn't forget, different strokes for different folks. Keep up the good work!

Work on your pans. They were painful.

Could you specify a little bit more in particular which shots. I didnt think they were too bad but.....

as a general rule of thumb, start your pans early so that you cut to a shot when the pan has already begun.

Basically every shot had a abrupt pan, or a pan that stopped started and stopped again.

Okay I understand now, how my pans are shitty. I will definitely work on it! Thanks. Also Mkvackay thanks too

Streets of Lake Oswego! Haha after reading that I couldn't not click on the thread.

It takes practice to get steady pans, over time they hopefully will get better.