Not a bad edit. A lot of good stuff in this one.
Also; keep the fonts in the beginning. It's rare to see such a clean approach. A well selected and well used font.
Improvements?
Segments could help
It's very hard to keep track of who's doing what.
Maybe it wasn't the purpose of this edit, but in my opinion, dividing it into segments where each skier have the space to do his thing, would make it easier to follow. Yes, one at a time.
Variation of camera angles:
Filming is more or less done from one angle and one distance. It's like you're having a follow-cam guy in tow. You could keep a lot of the existing footage but… What would happen if you had the camera on the ground at the end of a rail? What if you shot the kickers from the landing side?
We are basically seeing a lot of backs going over rails and jumps.
A few more angles and camera positions wouldn't hurt. Even when there's a static shot of a skier going over a rail, it feels refreshing.
In short:
Variation would make a good edit great. Plus, I liked the music. But you'll get as many opinions on music as there are viewers. Hope it helps!
Cheers,
:: hkn ::
