nice job man! i liked the camera movement a lot although i think you got a little carried away with it at times. looks like it was slider with a tripod head for the pans and tilts? and of course glidecam. i think some more tripod stationary shots focused more on framing would work well cut in between a couple of those. kinda like the toasts were shot. the last shot with the moon was dope
one thing i didn't like was the text in the beginning. i get what you are going for but i literally could see just white lines dancing across that part. maybe cut those every two beats or switch it up a lil.
overall pretty good. colors were nice and it looks like you did the best you could with that weird tent setup thing in the shade with the very bright outside. not much you can do there. they will love it tho.