It's really not my kind of music, but I'll try give some helpful comments.
Too shaky a lot of the time
Opening clip at the diy recording studio was weird as hell, looks like he's recording in a 1980s bedroom, try and detract from the background somehow, be it using the DOF, or lighting, whatever, It was just strange to me.
Framing on that mountain shot was weird, idk what it is about it, might have been better further down with him looking more straight/down, rather than up.
But yeah that guy didn't seem to really give a shit, which made it weird at 1:19 when it's just a tripod shot of him whispering with his lips and shaking his hands about. while looking like a giant compared to the tiny rubbish bin.
A lot of the negatives of it are also down to him, looking at the ground, away from the camera the whole time, being really placid, not that I'd be better, just that's a thing to note.