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PLS critique my music video!!

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shreddin_apples
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Jul 15 2013 12:02AM
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shreddin_apples
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Jul 15 2013 12:05AM
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shreddin_apples
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thanks sorry i fail at posting
Jul 15 2013 12:06AM
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LoathesRaisins
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Tell your friend he needs a new hobby.
Jul 15 2013 12:08AM
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shreddin_apples
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Theres nothing wrong with him making music its what he likes to do
Jul 15 2013 12:10AM
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shreddin_apples
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Yeah i agree with evrything you said. We only had one day to do the video so it was a bit repetitive along with a repetitive beat/ lyrics. Will be better coming soon 
Jul 15 2013 1:25AM
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Ski_Alot
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different tones/speeds, rapping about other stuff besides alcohol and weed, more interesting beat.
It's kinda boring to listen to honestly
Jul 15 2013 1:28AM
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BdoubleU
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Your skills were much better than his...

You did a good match with the lips/lyrics...at least far better than a lot of other beginner filmers.


Jul 15 2013 1:34AM
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DaffyDaDak
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less monotone type voice, tell him to put more flava in his voice. and the beat gets kind of boring pretty quick.
Jul 15 2013 2:13AM
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shreddin_apples
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would not consider myself a beginner filmer but this was all done freehand, with better equipment and time i could have made the video. I just wanted to know what you guys thought of the videography and vibe of the video. I get bored watching it myself and this is not something i would consider a good work of mine
Jul 15 2013 7:16PM
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shreddin_apples
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Agreed. I linked him this tread. Thanks guys
Jul 15 2013 7:17PM
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