Meant to comment on this before, sorry.
Slow motion is done well, the way you ramped it with the landings.
Audio on landings is good.
Wind seems to be a bit of a problem with your audio though, also it seems to get a bit cluttered with the song, maybe just using the sound of landings would sort that? IDK
Overexposed at points(think it was near the end noticably).
Take out the shuffled landings, just makes it bad(0:35 for example)
A bit shaky at times, that's something to work on. not unwatchable though.
I appreciate that your lighting wasn't the best, but still a good edit.
What was your setup?