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Montana Edit - Need Critique

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werd.
Posts: 967 - Karma: 4,330
Please Read: I made this video before I got into park skiing, so if you're looking for a park edit with rap music this video isn't for you.




Apr 25 2013 9:21AM
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lamppost
Posts: 277 - Karma: 197
i really iked it. i wouldnt have faded to black and faded out of the "Jimmy Ricard" song (i dont actually know what it was called). i also wouldve limited the self videoing shots, they geta little boring after awhile. i also really liked the beginning with the cuts in the video and the beats in the song
Apr 26 2013 9:06PM
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aKIZZLE
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Nice edit.
The beginning part was sick... the music, film burns, etc.
The skiing was superb and the editing was great.
Not much advice buddy pretty b@#$%n edit.
Apr 28 2013 12:38AM
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bieberhole69.
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Everything about the editing was sweet, but I'd agree that the face shots do get kind of boring. The only time I really like those are when youre getting some face shots.
Apr 28 2013 4:20PM
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Steezy_P
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I agree with everything said above. I think there were too many self shots for the lack of face shots, but the overall composition and the skiing was above par. Both had great flow and went together very nicely.

I have two comments:

1. I am so jealous that you got into YC (might I ask how?).

2. Stellar edit.
Apr 28 2013 5:52PM
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werd.
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My dad was roommates with a guy that sells real estate there so he hooks us up every now and then. and thanks for the feedback!
Apr 29 2013 9:13AM
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