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New MTB edit, crit

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MaxBerkowitz
Posts: 440 - Karma: 2,611
http://www.pinkbike.com/video/308449/

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Crit please, +k
Apr 21 2013 4:42AM
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werndog
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Music went really well with the edit. In the beginning some shots were a little dark but I could tell you were going for that. Nice job telling a story with the editing, don't know if you bike or not but maybe some sort of follow cam shot would've been nice. Or a long pan. DOF shots were nice, and as earlier said might look cool in slow motion. Great job man.
Apr 21 2013 11:03AM
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aKIZZLE
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Pretty sick edit with a dope track.
Some critique though:
-more consistency in editing
-more slow mo
-more b-roll
Sick edit though nice job man

Apr 21 2013 7:31PM
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steeze_pizza
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The edit was sick. And the trail looked extremely fun to ride! good job.
Apr 21 2013 9:12PM
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kfilenda
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Solid natural audio!
Apr 21 2013 9:29PM
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MaxBerkowitz
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Thanks everyone!
what do you mean by more b-roll haha, whats the point of having a bike edit have boring bits? He's not supposed to look like he's sessioning things over & over haha

and i'm going to disagree w/ everyone saying more slomo, i wanted it to look fast.
Apr 21 2013 10:52PM
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MaxBerkowitz
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bump, not private anymore so take a gander:

Apr 22 2013 10:09AM
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RimJobber
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I thought it was pretty sick, its just hard to make banger edits for mountain biking because all the pros are throwing such big stuff that it makes even a good rider look not as big like in yours.
I liked a lot of the shots and the location though
Apr 22 2013 12:41PM
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Tanner-D
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Really dope video working on a mtb edit myself right now
Apr 24 2013 2:51AM
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Mag
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Yeah it definitely didn't need more slowmo, even full speed wasn't fast enough to make it exciting. Cool edit, that shot where he's coming towards you and you pan to the right would have been perfect with a slider.


Apr 24 2013 6:58AM
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