Music went really well with the edit. In the beginning some shots were a little dark but I could tell you were going for that. Nice job telling a story with the editing, don't know if you bike or not but maybe some sort of follow cam shot would've been nice. Or a long pan. DOF shots were nice, and as earlier said might look cool in slow motion. Great job man.
Yeah it definitely didn't need more slowmo, even full speed wasn't fast enough to make it exciting. Cool edit, that shot where he's coming towards you and you pan to the right would have been perfect with a slider.