But yeah great commercial! As said above, color correction to match stuff would be nice (like the difference between shots around 45 sec), but other than that, it's really good! Maybe also duck the audio a little earlier, like around when you switch from the night shot to the logo.
I liked it allot actually, but I didn't really like the shot of the cafeteria inside at 0.55, I think it was to basic with one pan shot from inside witch makes it seem like it the cafeteria is full and that you could have done that part allot better.
But overall I really liked the shots and the flow.
Definitely enjoyed the first one from a non technical perspective, even despite the things magnus pointed out...It was probably just because the first one had lyrics, idk but it made it feel like it was going somewhere. The other one just kind of felt repetitive because of the song.
People helping people, its powerful stuff-AJizzle
ball bang is gnarly, but if you get it, you know you sent that shit to the thug zone and its worth a claim-shmad