If you insist.
I wouldn't have done it 2.35:1, I'm not sure if it was the song, or the shots
0:50 was the best shot in it imo, not sure if it's because there's trees instead of overeexposed snow(my next point) or a bunch of people.
Every white was blown out, some were close to being OK, but the rest were really bad, I know that you didn't have great conditions, but it certainly wasn't terrible, shoot in a flat profile and you'll be able to see the snow, + try lowering exposure a bit(expose for the snow is what I always go by, ignore the rest)
*note 1:04, you can't even see there's a box there, except for the blue
Although I like the song, and was gonna use it myself sometime, once I heard the olympic advert hundreds of times it just ruined it, since everyone was listening to it.
Wouldn't have used so many shots of casabon, none were very impressive(skiing not filming) so just use a couple of the best ones
Were you using warp stabilizer(or the like)? I saw what looks like warping at 0:45, but nothing apart from that, it's very well done if you were using it, if you weren't idk what it is.
Was it a glidecam you were using?
Continue the tripod shots, IMO it's annoying when you're panning along a rail and you stop suddenly. Just distracts me anyway.
Sorry for no real structure/timeline.