Wow I can tell you put a lot of effort into this man! Nice work.
The kick is definitely a bit loud.
There are actually a few dynamics issues but your mix is about a million times better than your last song.
Not sure but I feel like there's a bit of clipping in parts, I noticed some fuzz at about 1:00 that sounded a little odd to me.
Key change at the drop is cool haha. Really like the little melody that comes in for the second part of it.
After hearing that first part I really want to listen to deadmau5. I REALLY like chord change between the 3rd and 4th chords in that part, sounds really nice. It plays off your melody so well.
Stoked to see you're making progress man! Huge step up from your last track.
Do you have any speakers? Or are you working with headphones and laptop speakers?