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slc_utahboiii
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Cannonsburg in February from Switch Up Productions on Vimeo.


Thanks guys, let me know what you think!

Feb 13 2013 8:09PM
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AGallant
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Super soliid. The song goes perfect with the rest of the editing. And good skiing!
Feb 13 2013 8:24PM
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Mkvackay
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i liked how over half was tripod, its definitely a breath of fresh air, but...

the same angle from the same feature for the first ~30 ish seconds got very repetitive

once again i felt like the cinescope crop didn't work. you cut off heads/skis multiple times plus it felt forced

the fish glides were pretty good
Feb 13 2013 8:34PM
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slc_utahboiii
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thanks man! yah i need to work on framing still, I tried to make it a more diverse edit with the tripod and glide shots, I will master the crop!!!!

thanks for the feedback my man!!
Feb 13 2013 8:50PM
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-mix up the angles for those first few shots
-colors were a little too washed out for my preference (especially blacks)
-maybe mix the follow shots in with the tripod shots?

overall i really liked it, good vibes!
Feb 13 2013 9:11PM
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.qzyxya
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This. The tripod shots looked nice but got repetitive. If you had cut between them with some glidecam shots it would have been better.
But overall sick edit and I really liked the music. Good to see something that isnt just 100% follow cams.
Feb 13 2013 9:11PM
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dunesquirrel
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that was great man. agree with everyone else and really like the colours. thanks for using a tripod for a lot of it, this is what we need more of. I feel that a lot of filmers are getting lazy with the glidecam footage. good stuff!
Feb 13 2013 9:17PM
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Mkvackay
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no problem.

on a side note the monster park looks insane and can't wait to hit it up
Feb 13 2013 9:44PM
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slc_utahboiii
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Thanks guys! great feedback, I think i needed to mix up the tripod shots a little, but im glad you guys like it!!! real inspiring +k for all
Feb 13 2013 10:14PM
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Lwaghorn
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I really enjoyed that! You made the slow song work very well. I would have liked to hear just a little more audio from the skiing. Just to add to the slow motion a little. Also I dont know if anyone else would agree but some of the tripod shots felt just a little to centered, I would have liked to see them a little more to one of the thirds. Im not experienced in filming but hey its all IMO. Overall I loved the vibe! Great stuff
Feb 13 2013 10:42PM
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slc_utahboiii
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Yah man I forgot my rode mic for the first day of filmin, I know what you mean about the centering though, thanks for the feedback!
Feb 14 2013 8:52AM
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Swaggermager
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This is sick! Slowmo edits that are done right are so awesome! That song was sweet
Feb 14 2013 9:58AM
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slc_utahboiii
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Thanks man! anything you would change?
Feb 14 2013 10:25AM
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