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Edit critique please?

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jeb_b_vt
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Alex Romero from No Matter Productions on Vimeo.

Feb 5 2013 8:43AM
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HWW
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not bad, wasn't too long either.

here are the things i noticed:
• effects were used a little bit too much for a short edit
• could have left out the sloppy landing(s)
• not all shots should be the same speed, leaves something to be desired
• the text at the end was very difficult to read because of all the clutter

good work, i give you a 7/10.
Feb 5 2013 10:09AM
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jeb_b_vt
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Thanks for the tips! I thought it turned out pretty well for only taking 4 runs haha
Feb 5 2013 2:05PM
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jeb_b_vt
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Bump
Feb 5 2013 9:34PM
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jeb_b_vt
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he wanted me to make it somewhat like the b&e show, was it even close?
Feb 7 2013 4:58PM
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