super sick for your first edit.
Only got a few things to say. Some of the shots could have been a little tighter. It felt like you were shooting wide a majority of the time. Also, some shots were a tad over exposed. If you dont have an ND filter, get one. They are a life saver on hill. Lastly, you may want to invest in a glidecam or nice tripod if you are serious into filming. Shots look so much better with decent stabilization.
Because I'm from the suburbs, not Compton. And you look like an idiot when you are all thugged out in the parking lot waiting for Mom to pick you up in her Lexus crossover.