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Critique: Wake and Clothing Video

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Double-U
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Here's a little video I made for a friend since he's been recently sponsored by Vitalire Apparel. I was limited in lens usage so I was no able to really get many shots close up of some things but I'd love to hear your guys feedback.

Thanks

Chad Spady for Vitalire from Jeff Weber on Vimeo.

Nov 8 2012 8:53PM
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HoughtonHuffton
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Chill vibes. Loving the golden hour stuff.
Nov 8 2012 9:04PM
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Drew_ski.
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pretty chill edit. and the apparel looks sick too, do you guys have a website?
Nov 8 2012 11:15PM
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Double-U
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yeah their shits pretty nice, and its just vitalire.com
Nov 9 2012 12:32AM
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Double-U
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Id love to hear some more criticism on this. +k
Nov 12 2012 4:43PM
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cwillygood
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Loved the song, The Police are classic

I thought the video was really cool, i thought you might have gone a little overboard with the film burns but it worked good with the lights, it had a nice vibe, there was a few random shots, like one of a tree in the beginning but besides that i thought it was great, color was really nice, good variety of shots and killer song
Nov 12 2012 4:49PM
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Moosen
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Try to keep your shadow out of some of the shots. A couple shots seemed a little dark to me. And then there were some repeated film burns/maybe tone down the film burn usage.
Nov 12 2012 5:37PM
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t_rob
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Does that guy use a 90 foot line?
Nov 12 2012 8:02PM
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