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Critique my trampoline edit !

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steezyshit
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I would like to have some feed back on the first edit of a serie i'm starting. It can be about the filming and editing I would just like to improve for the next edits i'm going to do.

And I know the effect before the double cork is kinda shitty does any one know how I could of done it better ?

Thanks !

Oct 26 2012 10:33AM
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Mag
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the overlayed clip at 0:14 shouldn't have been cut away like that, the way it was say 50% opacity and then set to 0% instantly without any graduation, made it look like my pc was lagging.
Oct 26 2012 10:44AM
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Bmo.
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Warm up those colors! Song choice was terrible. I hate rap so i am biased, but you need something chill with a good vibe. idk. filming wasn't bad though, enjoyed the tricks. keep em coming
Oct 26 2012 11:38AM
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steezyshit
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Ok ill try to fix that next time thx !
Oct 26 2012 2:18PM
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steezyshit
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Ok ill try that ! and yeah i'm trying different stuff with song right now i made my edit for the msonw contest with a chiller song but it was filmed like shit haha
Oct 26 2012 2:20PM
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JahFeels
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Don't do the little gay shit like what you did at the very end.
Oct 29 2012 7:20PM
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steezyshit
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thanks man so constructive !
Oct 29 2012 8:21PM
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gusestomp
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The font at the end is a no go, I couldn't read it clearly.
Oct 31 2012 12:01AM
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steezyshit
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Ok ill try something different thanks for the advice !
Oct 31 2012 9:58AM
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