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Can I get an honest opinion?

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baethoven
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Does my remix/mashup/sample mapped song suck or is it listenable? It's a work in progress so criticism is welcome. I realize the end isn't expected and up everyone's ally, and apologize beforehand. I'm learning through experimentation with multiple genres.




Oct 20 2012 1:16PM
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shuckle
Posts: 590 - Karma: 317
yes
Oct 20 2012 1:18PM
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Obi-Wan-Jenobi
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i kinda liked it
Oct 20 2012 1:29PM
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GrabsForFun
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It was deffinatly listenable  in the begining but the dubstep part in hte end was wack, just like all dubstep
Oct 20 2012 1:33PM
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casual
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I think there's some good ideas, but I also think it's incredibly monotonous for the first 2:40. There's no dynamics to it, and the melody isn't all that memorable until that 2:40 mark. I also didn't like the rap verse as it clashed with the sedate, ambient vibe of the first half of the song. I really did like the minute or so after the 2:40 mark, a nice little groove, but as someone who isn't a fan of dubstep in the slightest, I lost interest at that point.

Honestly, overall I don't think it was very good, certainly not downright awful, and obviously this is just my opinion.


Oct 20 2012 1:43PM
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dompuch
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i liked it man keep it up, i enjoyed the dub
Oct 20 2012 1:52PM
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DaffyDaDak
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Just start the song at 2:50 from there on. i really enjoyed that part
Oct 20 2012 2:43PM
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DaffyDaDak
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Fuck. 1:50 sorry
Oct 20 2012 2:44PM
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Mag
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You've got it in the reverse for most of it, the vocals are too quiet and the instruments too loud.
Oct 20 2012 2:47PM
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Dragonite.
Posts: 1657 - Karma: 431
I mean it wasn't bad but it wasn't really good either. It can use a little more excitement.
Oct 20 2012 2:47PM
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RedEyeTheJedi
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I liked it, after 1:50 it was prime. The ending could be worked on a bit. Just mess around and see what works.
Oct 20 2012 3:02PM
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baethoven
Posts: 4953 - Karma: 332
word word sphanks y'all. All advice and criticism is well received. I have a 30 day free trail I'm trying to take advantage of and need all the help I can get haha.
Oct 20 2012 3:03PM
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Aidan-G
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I really liked it until the dubstep part. Everything else was pretty good
Oct 20 2012 4:51PM
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