Overall I think it was a solid and good edit, I enjoyed it.
What kind of tripod/stabilizer do you use? It looked pretty ''laggy'' sometimes.. If you want to keep making these edits you should definitely invest in a solid trip head (pm me if you need recommendations)
The editing worked out well with the music, great song btw, but you should have let the last shot roll out so we could see hes landing, that would make the end 10xtimes better in my opinion..
And last, the shot at 2:30 was great!!
Hope this was helpful!