Getting better and better as said. A few things to keep in mind-
-Watch the audio levels. They sounded like they were clipping a few times.
-I think you could go without the Montana Wild Production at the end since you had it at the start.
-You don't always have to be panning or sliding. Some solid static shots are good too. It's really easy to get excited when the action happens and then you loose your flow on a pan.
-Not sure what lenses you have, but some longer shots thrown in there would give it some more diversity. Maybe some shots towards their front as they're casting out? Just keep working those different angles and focal lengths!
Been loving seeing your progression. Keep it up!
