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I think the big drop should come a little sooner, like when the first swooshy build up happens and then you should have a middle section like a bridge bit where it mellows down then back to your drop. Also Im not sure if this is the style you are going for but the track sounded a little thin. I would add some pads and almost room tony type stuff in the background to give it a smooth and fatter feel.