Advice on my edit please

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So I Startd shredding at the ripe age of 26 ... Love Park skiing I know I need work and for me thts a matter of money ..Passes r not cheap.. anyway this was a little edit iI put together..now please kepp in mind first yr skiing and also my filmer first time as well.. all im looking for is tips.. I'd like to grow and progess so any advice would be helpful.. THANKS AND oh yah i dont know how to embed thanks for your patients guys ..this is humbling to ask young kids advice so help a old guy out .. trust you will be there soooooon ...this a end of yr edit at carinthia , Mt Snow thanks guys

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8mZAxLGone8

Jul 3 2012 6:47PM

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Birddogmurray

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Its way too shaky, you need to keep the camera a lot more steady

Jul 3 2012 7:50PM

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JahJahBinks

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Get a new song
Make the song match the skiing
Don't do slow motion, you can see the single frames go by
Lose the font at the beginning
Do gnarlier tricks

Jul 3 2012 8:15PM

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BROBRO

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this would be a better fit for the media&arts forum...

Jul 3 2012 8:39PM

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crab_pretzel

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im kind of surprised i am the first person to be saying this, but, let me give you a big pat on the back for starting park skiing at 26. i bet that is not easy. and nice progress for your first year too.

i agree with the no slow motion comment, and put the camera on the end of something long like a ski pole. its length and weight should help steady the shots versus holding the camera in your hand.

Jul 3 2012 8:56PM

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Nate.Dog

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Props for putting yourself out there man! my advice, hit more of the rails instead of just going off the sides, it puts unnecessary wear on the lips, stick to jumps for getting in the air, maybe get some poles? its really nice for your balance, and as it is your first year skiing it will look A LOT better, hahaha, other than that, keep shredding and progressing bro!

Jul 3 2012 9:01PM

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dh1028

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yea def need to be centered more and also less shaky...im not one of those guys that just goes off the side of lips on rails usaully but being that it was super late season and snow was slow i was kinda sketched out .. rails r tough, all that skiing was with a cast on my left arm from a rail I crunched it on ...but i do appreciate the compliments and the non negetivity...

Jul 3 2012 11:05PM

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dh1028

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I can shred heres proof this is at 11k but the park is very tough

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ySsIJZPNBsU

Jul 3 2012 11:09PM

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