I think what makes the patch special is the journey to it, some shots in the beginning showing the road up and maybe a wide landscape shot showing that it is a little strip of snow would put the location in context.
Also I wasn't really getting the fun vibe that the patch provides. It is about sunshine, bbq, friends, goofing off, hiking for hits, ect... (to me at least). The riding/filming was good but it didn't have that "feel good" quality.
However, I did the like the colors and the slow mo was smooth, some more filler shots of people relaxing, eating, laughing would have gone a long way in my opinion. But very solid stuff with the action shots.
Totally get where you are coming from Allen. To be honest I just didn't film enough what I did film was just riding not much of anything else. If I had the shots I would have used them. Thanks for the critique.