hey so seen this and figured i would offer my opinion.
i liked the clips, and loved the camera work :)
i wasnt a huge fan of the color correction though (it looks like it was a super nice day out, but the cc makes the sky look kinda grey ish)
perhaps maybe a few different transistions between clips, there are a lot of cuts and fades, perhaps experiment more with wipes, or even masks?
maybe a nice little 2d overlay on the intro with name and year? (use a program like cinema 4d or 3ds max)
what program are you using to edit it with?
anyway im also fairly new to the community, although ive had a ton of expierience with editing software, im really new to using cameras so take my advice with a grain of salt. Nice use of effects for just learning though keep up the good work :)