Edit needed to be more concise and to the point. The video didn't need to be over 1:30. Really this was just the same trick the entire video just at different angles which got really boring fast. Even though there were multiple angle you don't need to use them all. Your video needs to show your point without losing interest of the viewer. I know you said that the tricks were terrible and aren't even really tricks then that means you will probably lose your audience faster which means you need to be more concise and make the video shorter so people stay tuned in the whole video. Personally I disliked the song and I didn't like the flow but that might just be me. Aslo you don't want to add shots for the sake of adding shots you only want to add shots that you think are going to add to the value of your video. I know I am kinda guilty of this too but can I ask why the need to have a production company? I hope this critique helps you with your future work.
Also I lost it hard at the chad's comment ahahahaha
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