Critique my edit

yea thanks I need to learn how to do that +k

I don't know if it was the look you were going for but your white blance was way off in the first half and I didn't like how a lot of the tripod shots were still and then all of the sudden they would start panning and tilting in random directions.

I think your white balance was off in the first half of the video. if you notice the clips are blue that mean the whit balance is off. some of the clips seemed a bit long and then started panning which didn't look to good.  i liked some of the shots though especially the last one maybe if you could have speed it up as people came off the train it would look more interesting, that clip lasted a little to long for me.