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Please Critique My Edit (First Ever)

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B.Taillefer
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Recently I broke my collarbone (I am the one in the full blue and black armada suit), and decided to try my hand at editing. I have been around editing lots, my good friend and fellow NS member A.Haydenluck makes really good edits, and I have always helped film them, but never really edited. This is my first attempt at editing, and actually really enjoyed the process, so I would like to be critiqued so I can get better from here on out.

This was all filmed on a GoPro, and edited in iMovie

Thanks, Ben


Feb 7 2012 8:32PM
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B.Taillefer
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anyone? I know its not very good, but i still would want some feedback to improve off of....
Feb 7 2012 9:31PM
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Asterisk
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Just from a casual viewers POV:

Probably a bit too long. There was a bunch of repeat tricks and a bunch of tricks that probably just shouldn't have went in. (180?) also a bunch of shots were very yellow so you might want to think about doing some colour correction. Other than that I really liked it. keep it up
Feb 7 2012 10:13PM
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