Ha yes, of course, posted way too many times about something that didnt really matter, my bad.
I think its a solid start. I don't think you should go much longer, but thats IMO. Some of the jump cuts were way too jerky i thought and some of the random up-pans could be cut. Also, i'd say try to group things together, i felt like it was very scattered. At one point you show the same shot as before of a different skier, just like 30 sec later and you actually show the cut to landing. Just seemed like a very random/confusing order of shots.