Hey everyone, this is a rough draft, I have some more editing to do to it but i wanted to ask for some critques on it. Thanks
seemed very slow to me for being a racing and (fast racing) video. titles were way too long and i agree with the above post, make your own titles, be creative and make them shorter people are usually competent when it comes to reading and can read two lines faster than 4 seconds. song choices were kinda bad in my opinion, like has already been mentioned, if your gonna use dubstep, make the edits very quick. the shots with the change in depth of field were awful only because it was so slow.
so i could go on about the bad but to improve it i would suggest:
1. make your own titles and never use pre-sets cuz any editor will know where you got it and how unprofessional it looks
2. pick songs that flow with the content of your video, if your going to go with dubstep the cuts have to be quick and line up the cut with the audio! that is a huge turn off for a viewer when the shots don't match the sound.
3. don't include the sounds of the car unless you have a good mic to pick up the true thunderous sound instead of a crackly grumble...(except for shots of the car racing on track if thats how you want your edit to go)
4. do a little color correction and color grading, this will also make it more enjoyable to watch and look more professional.
hope this helps..neat stuff tho
I found it to be a little sluggish also with the dubstep which I'm currently working on fixing. Also the titles aren't preset's I just made some quick easy titles on Afteraffects.