first off I really liked the colours. gave the video a nice pop. the editing was clean but still fast paced, props for that.
Pet peeves would definately include the ridiculous vignette and the musical A.D.D. at 0:20. Also wtf was up with the colours at 0:44, like holy fucking oversaturation.
over all pretty rad, the titles and such make it feel professional, but the editing isnt quite there yet