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Critique my edit?

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E.C.
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just a little one i made with the few shots i did have,

let me know what you think,

you might as well critique my skiing as well
Oct 10 2011 8:56PM
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E.C.
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anything would be appreciated!
Oct 10 2011 9:27PM
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bakedpow
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Idk, i thought some of the framing of the shots could have been better.

The follow cam got a bit repetitive maybe try using some different angles, also the follow cam was a little shaky.

Other than that it was decent for a quick made edit.
Oct 10 2011 9:41PM
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E.C.
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yeah pretty sure it was either the camera was mounted on my buddys helmet or jsut hand held.
Oct 10 2011 9:43PM
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erikK
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I found the song pretty whack. Try doing some non follow-cams as well
Oct 10 2011 10:12PM
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Dub_Digital
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7s looked dopee
Oct 10 2011 11:37PM
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Moosen
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Damn dude! Sick skiing. looked like you had fun!

follow cams were pretty shaky and boring. but otherwise solid stuff dude! don't worry
Oct 10 2011 11:48PM
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bakedpow
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Oh and please dont make it autoplay...
Oct 10 2011 11:50PM
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AK_Media
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Didnt like the song, was it pretty lights?
Oct 11 2011 12:37AM
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Cop.killer
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A bigger variety of tricks would have made it more interesting to watch, especially with the jump line. The gopro filming was a little distant too, getting your filmer a little closer would have helped (also buying a pole attachement for the gopro).

The intro was done pretty nicely, I liked the music. It was nice to see someone switch it up once and a while. Also MSLM represent!!!
Oct 11 2011 12:43AM
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Jaymon
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apparently the song is controversial... i really didnt like it haha,

liked the transitions, not distracting but better than the standard additive or black/white dissolve
Oct 11 2011 1:10AM
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E.C.
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robotic pirate monkeys
Oct 11 2011 9:59AM
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greyninja
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helmet cams are hard. someones gotta ski while looking sideways if theyre doing followcams
Oct 11 2011 10:43AM
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AK_Media
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word toss up between the two, I normally like both artists but not this song haha
Oct 11 2011 12:51PM
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