hey man i really enjoyed what you did and i think u made a good edit with some great skiing. you obviously have alot of talent for tele skiing and i give u props for doing something different.
i too own a pair of telemark skiis. which i use for skinning up mountains, slashing powder, trekking and killing pillow lines. i also own a pair of park skis which i use for park.
to me, tele skiis are actually alot more dangerous for the park, and i have had a serious ankle injury after trying a spin on some telemarks. i really think you should consider using telemarks for thier intended purposes, (skinning, powder, grommers) and get a pair of park skiis for hitting large jumps and handrails. it will help your style a ton, it will make riding park waaaay more fun and it will be safer.
anyway , u asked for advice and there it is. btw, ur front flip on teles was fucking cool as shit.