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Looking for some serious feedback/critic on my edit!

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kzrstf
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The movie I worked on throughout the whole season. I shot less than expected, but still, i managed to make a pretty complete edit (mostly urban).

Now, next year will be my last year filming ski, and i really want to do something epic. this is why i ask you guys feedback, comments, critics, cause i want to make sure my next year edit will be top notch haha!

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Apr 10 2011 8:58PM
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Franck_clever
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damn why? your soo good at it! i really liked this edit filming/editing was perfectt
Apr 10 2011 9:07PM
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McFellon
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not sure i can say anything. it's too perfect. don't ever stop
Apr 10 2011 9:22PM
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kzrstf
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haha thanks, but i'll be at uni and i wont be skiing as much. ill miss it for sure
Apr 10 2011 9:22PM
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kzrstf
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bump!
Apr 11 2011 9:37AM
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Jacuse
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that was really good, only complaint would be to not use film burn or whatever that was as much
Apr 11 2011 10:04AM
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Franck_clever
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Which camera did you used
Apr 11 2011 12:22PM
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bakedpow
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Awesome edit man. What was the song?
Apr 11 2011 12:36PM
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VanMelle
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First, def not what I expected from most of the "critic my edit" threads...very solid stuff in this edit

Second the only things I can say is def dont over use the film burn transition, when you only have a short edit you cant use it too much since it is very noticeable.

Also the urban filming was very good, just maybe try and get more creative with the angles and shots, I know that is very hard to do if your the only one filming and dont want to fuck up a shot and miss it, but just something to think of in the future.

Very nice tho man, props and hopefully next season (if your last filming as much) will be your best!
Apr 11 2011 12:47PM
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kzrstf
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all shot with t2i

first songs is solomon vandy by james newton howard
and second song is endgame by spit syndicate
Apr 11 2011 1:14PM
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kzrstf
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bump
Apr 11 2011 11:34PM
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Sklar
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that was sick dude!
keep up the killer work
Apr 11 2011 11:51PM
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blatt
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Crane shots were epic.

It seemed to me that the opening shots with the slider were really close in. Other wise, I couldnt think of anything else done wrong.
Apr 11 2011 11:56PM
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kzrstf
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thanks to all!
bump
Apr 14 2011 1:12PM
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BoardSideDown
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All I would say for non-urban shots where you were at a resort I felt the follow cam to be very repetitive in the sense you were always on the right side of the rider and in the same position, maybe just change up a few angles, then I would say damn good edit man.

Really solid nice work! First song choice was prime to really enjoyed it.
Apr 14 2011 2:09PM
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kzrstf
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bump! thanks everyone
Apr 25 2011 11:05PM
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The_Hannes
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the beginning was cool, gave me chills
Apr 26 2011 8:03AM
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1337
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-awesome intro, i really dug the song.
-great boom shots, only complaint with those would be keep them moving all the way through the shot, sometimes you stopped short half way through the shot.
-you handled noise very well for the low light shots, but some were just a tad under exposed and dark.
-film burn was overused, like said before
-too short! I wanted more! :)
Apr 26 2011 8:36AM
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