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Critique My Edit +k

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ktd619
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also plus k for embed because this computer wont do it.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4KMoIzFANC8&feature=channel_video_title

Mar 28 2011 7:57PM
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cultrara
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Mar 28 2011 8:00PM
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cultrara
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good skiing but could use some style

not so good filming, use better angles and steady those shots

i feel like the song was used before and it didnt really fit

Mar 28 2011 8:03PM
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andrew95
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i really enjoyed it but the long black screens were annoying after a while. also, try to make the edit go and flow with the music more overall good job
Mar 28 2011 8:09PM
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ktd619
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Thanks, the only thing is im from a small town where im the only kid who skis...and the only kid who understands what a follow cam is so i have to use 1st person most of the time. And thanks for the advice on style, will def work on that next season.
Mar 28 2011 8:11PM
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cultrara
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haha yeah i hate that my friends cant film
Mar 28 2011 8:45PM
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Tmacaholic
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decent maybe put those mistys into the snow.  work on style and angles and it could be good.
Apr 4 2011 6:25PM
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ktd619
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I only did the misty into foam once, right when i did it i hyper extended my knee and ended up missing a few days of my colorado trip...
Apr 4 2011 11:22PM
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ID3A
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Try not to put in more than two of the same trick in as well. Also what everyone else is saying is good advice.

Keep it up!
Apr 4 2011 11:37PM
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