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Critique my surf edit

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Dub_Digital
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just threw this together give it some blowsss haha

Mar 19 2011 5:39PM
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screamin_seamen
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If you were closer to the subjects that might be better. Intro was way to long, invest in a better tripod.

Other than those small things everything else was great.
Mar 19 2011 6:21PM
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DrZoidberg
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Well I enjoy the song choice. Some shots definitely need more zoom though, and try not to jerk the camera on the tripod.
Mar 19 2011 8:14PM
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Dub_Digital
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+k for the advice..bump
Mar 19 2011 9:27PM
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PJS.
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TRIPOD

surf edits need flow, flow =/= jerking camera
Mar 20 2011 12:28PM
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Dub_Digital
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thanks bumpp
Mar 20 2011 8:13PM
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EasyEast
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intro and ending shots were a little week prob should have picked better ones and deff find a way to get your shots closer but other than that good stuff chill song and such good little time lapse in the middle
Mar 20 2011 11:14PM
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Dub_Digital
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^thanks a lot man, bump
Mar 21 2011 9:34PM
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Dub_Digital
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criticism bumpo
Mar 24 2011 6:42PM
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Brentizzle
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I thought it was good. I think you could have cut up some of the first clips so they werent so long and maybe had a few more different lifestyle/intro shots. Also you really need a better tripod and that will make it easier to keep the subject in the center of the shot and the viewer wont have to look for what to watch.

Hope that helps a bit.
Mar 24 2011 7:57PM
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