Im not the best person to ask advice from, but i thought it was a really cool edit. Song was iffy but i liked the flow of the video and the shots werent held to long or to short and there were a ton of diff angles. nice job
Song's volume was really quiet especially compared to the skiing audio. Also, try a little bit of color correction and ditch the intro from the start to where he's walking out the door. It's been done soo many times.
Fuck what you heard, it's the five-oh-third