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Shot and processing critique

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Sklar
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I pulled this shot from my last thread, because it was the only one i really like

i'm looking for critique on the shot and on the black and white conversion

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thanks
Nov 27 2010 3:00PM
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.jr
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We already told you what we thought in the last thread, why would you make a new thread? Just bump the old one..
Nov 27 2010 3:10PM
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klayer_9
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both are sick, but the green in the colored photo is a little distracting, if you could dim that down the color photo would be better.
Nov 27 2010 3:12PM
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Sklar
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i did a few times, but that was cluttered with other photos i wasn't really looing to get more feedback on

i'll have it deleted if it bugs people


this is why i think posts in M&A should be editable
Nov 27 2010 3:26PM
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icantskiiFILM
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yeah the greens kinda distracting. just dim it down a little bit but i think the photos pretty sick..


how did you create the light trails? did you just do a long exposure with a strobe on full power and then zoom in?

what might be better is if this was the case..find a way to make the trails more straight
Nov 27 2010 7:16PM
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Sklar
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i didn't have a tripod on me, so i was laying on my back doing it handheld, thats why they aren't totally straight
Nov 27 2010 7:28PM
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icantskiiFILM
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understood. well do a reshoot!
Nov 27 2010 11:30PM
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