Another Edit Critique Thread.

Close to Home from trever wilson on Vimeo.

I guess ns doesn't work with the new vimeo embed code..
one more try...
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fail.

i don't know why but i just started to cry.

My threads for later. I've got some specific things I want to bring up, because you're on the right track but you need to work on a good couple things.

That was very well put together. Fly fishing has to be the most peaceful activity on earth.

My only critique would to get some shots of you landing the fish.Fantastic job though.