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Please critique my edit again +k

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Burkski
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i tried to work some with matte overlays on this one. the second time was a little overkill i know. anyway let me know wat u all think!

http://vimeo.com/10947167

im not sure how to embed it straight in so if someone could help me out +k
May 31 2010 6:43PM
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Burkski
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<object width="400" height="225"><param name="allowfullscreen" value="true" /><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always" /><param name="movie" value="http://vimeo.com/moogaloop.swf?clip_id=10947167&server=vimeo.com&show_title=1&show_byline=1&show_portrait=0&color=&fullscreen=1" /><embed src="http://vimeo.com/moogaloop.swf?clip_id=10947167&server=vimeo.com&show_title=1&show_byline=1&show_portrait=0&color=&fullscreen=1" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowfullscreen="true" allowscriptaccess="always" width="400" height="225"></embed></object><p><a href="http://vimeo.com/10947167">Max Alonso shreddin N*</a> from <a href="http://vimeo.com/user2911841">RoosterTailProductions</a> on <a href="http://vimeo.com">Vimeo</a>.</p>
May 31 2010 6:44PM
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Burkski
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faill...
May 31 2010 6:45PM
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BryantPhoto
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[vimeo]http://vimeo.com/10947167[/vimeo]

May 31 2010 6:47PM
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BryantPhoto
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my bad
[vimeo]10947167[/vimeo]
May 31 2010 6:48PM
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butteredjohnson
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get rid of that fancy editor

Max Alonso shreddin N* from RoosterTailProductions on Vimeo.

May 31 2010 6:48PM
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ajbski
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pretty cool dude
mega props
just one question
what song?
May 31 2010 6:50PM
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Jib-in-my-pants
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Sick edit,

The end transitions were a little bit much (like the black flash) other than that it's pretty steezy.

I give you mad props.
May 31 2010 7:01PM
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A.Eberhard
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Pretty sick edit, but to me it felt that there were just to many effects that I couldn't concentrate on the riding.
May 31 2010 7:09PM
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tom.skier
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The only thing I would say was I wasn't 100% on how it kept changing from black and white to yellow tint to colour and the different effects. Apart from that, I thought it was pretty decent! Some good filming in there. Props!
May 31 2010 7:23PM
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Burkski
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awesome thanks guys! +k for everyone and the song is

"Miranda"
Wu-Tang
Wu-Massacre
May 31 2010 8:07PM
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.frenchy
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holy shitt, the snowboarding was dope! and great song too, i even commented on the vimeo link.
Jun 3 2010 5:11PM
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MatRich
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you said it yourself, its overkill. the editing takes attention away from the riding. And the change of colors, tint and saturation... I think should never be used since it screams "this was edited to make this moment less dull" yet people still do it a lot so maybee im the only one... I dont know
Jun 4 2010 10:48AM
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LC.
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You're trying way too hard. Ditch all the effects. All of them. Keep editing to the beat though, you seem to understand that unlike most people.
Jun 4 2010 10:54AM
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Burkski
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word, thanks for the advice guys! ill be dropping another new edit hopefully soon!
Jun 4 2010 12:40PM
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Beez
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find a skier to film and it would be awsome
Jun 4 2010 3:31PM
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.jersey
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new much flashy shit. other than that real good. the song goes real well with it. instead of that board use skis and itll be alot better
Jun 4 2010 3:45PM
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Burkski
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^^ ^ haha i know, when my spring and summer edits drop hopefully you will all be stoked, all skiers and i will definatly take into consideration the comments, thanks again. bump
Jun 4 2010 5:45PM
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DERS.
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sick footy
one thing is too many flashes and too many transitions used unnecessarily
Jun 4 2010 6:32PM
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Burkski
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^thanks for the advice, i understand too much is going on in the edit, dont need any more of those comments! thanks!
Jun 5 2010 10:35PM
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JESSE.
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nice footage just get rid of the color changes.
Jun 5 2010 10:52PM
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Burkski
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yeah.. color changes n flashes, got it thanks.
Jun 6 2010 5:17PM
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