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My band's song on itunes! +k for feedback!

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Mr.Plank
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Hey newschoolers
My band recently put out a single on itunes.  We're all really stoked.
 I know i'll probobly get a ton of hate about advertising this, but if you could give it a listen, even buy the song if you like it, it would really help us a ton!

+k for any feedback.  Let me know if you bought it! Tell me what you think!

ps- Genre=Indie and I play drums and sing.
(ignore the reviews, they're probably from our friends)

http://itunes.apple.com/us/album/explosions/id365768829http://itunes.apple.com/us/album/explosions/id365768829
May 21 2010 12:26PM
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Arabian.
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That was great! I was surprised. Only one criticism for you though:

HIRE A NEW FUCKING GUITARIST. Honestly, someone who can play good rhythm and not shitty oversaturated solos.
May 21 2010 12:56PM
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Alex_G
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first off, OP that was very sick dude, props for recording a solid track!

arabian--i disagree completely, the guitarist was sick, and to be honest if you only have rhythm guitar you are wasting the guitar's potential. it's not always a solo when the guitarist plays a melody, its just a melodic riff rather than a solo.
May 21 2010 1:14PM
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Alex_G
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and especially if you have piano bass and drums keeping the rhythm for you already. no need for too much rhythm and the vocals should have some melodic accompaniment which is the lead guitar.
May 21 2010 1:19PM
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Arabian.
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Still, the cliche oversaturated solo was really what I was picking at. I would prefer someone who plays better rhythm and plays a good, tasteful solo. What we get is someone with beginner skill on the guitar and it doesn't sound as good as it could.

Just because you turn the distortion up doesn't mean its a good solo.
May 21 2010 1:19PM
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Alex_G
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listened to it again, and I think the guitar needs to be more on time...he does sound like a beginner and he should practice with a metronome. maybe since it's indie rock that was his attempt at being artsy?
May 21 2010 1:25PM
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Arabian.
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No, that's just his lack of experience. If there's anything that's killing indie, it's that people think it's okay to not play their instruments. You think Animal Collective would pass if they weren't geniuses with MIDI? Or would Radiohead get by if their guitars weren't perfect? I can't name one band where they were completely shitty at their instruments and still made it.
May 21 2010 1:29PM
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Alex_G
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The white stripes...meg white is fucking terrible at drums and she made it sound artsy...the beatles--ringo fucking sucked however everybody else was epic so it didn't matter...there are many more
May 21 2010 1:33PM
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Arabian.
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Meg white is acceptable. and she was next to Jack White. It's not like you could hear her live anyway lol.
May 21 2010 1:35PM
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kronickrew
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That's ill I bought it.
May 21 2010 2:23PM
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dompuch
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thats so sick congrats
May 21 2010 2:40PM
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Mr.Plank
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Thanks so much everyone! The guitarist may not be the best at soloing but he's extremely creative! +k to everyone that bought! We're using this money to get into a better studio.

heres another song of ours (for free).

http://rapidshare.com/files/390060826/Misleading.mp3.html
May 21 2010 2:56PM
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Mr.Donut
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really sick song man
May 21 2010 3:43PM
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.frenchy
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Song was ill, guitarist was iffy..I cant buy the song now because i have a couple cents left on my iTunes, but if i remember it il buy it for sure!
May 21 2010 3:45PM
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AdolfShitler
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Lol at people who bought this song also bought: Avenged Sevenfold, Dave Matthews Band, Arcade Fire, Hannah Montana and Fallout Boy
May 21 2010 3:53PM
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Mr.Plank
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hahahaha oh god....(arcade fire is really good though)
May 21 2010 4:11PM
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BerkeleyD
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not bad at all, I actually Liked it a lot. The only thing I have to say is your guitarist needs to work on the solos a little what your doing could sound so much better if the solos were a little more worked out. Dont be afraid to retry them in recording untell your get them perfect, this is your creation make it as beautifull as you can.
May 21 2010 4:25PM
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Mr.Plank
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Yeah we're saving up money for a better studio/ more time. All of the Itunes money is going towards that so thanks a lot for the support!
May 21 2010 7:42PM
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3-6-steeze
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Pretty Good job
May 21 2010 9:45PM
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i.ski.troll.
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really liked it, Ill buy it when I go up to my desktop computer.
May 21 2010 9:54PM
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GORlLLA
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Delish
May 21 2010 10:06PM
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Gooseling
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now add the jonas brothers to the list too
May 21 2010 10:12PM
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Dan.P
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Thats so good, i like the album art as well

May 21 2010 11:02PM
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Bukkakeskitrip
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i like
May 21 2010 11:03PM
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bbbbbowman
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Great song, i can't buy it though only in the U.S store....
May 21 2010 11:09PM
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wwatkins
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i liked it so i bought it.
May 21 2010 11:13PM
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alvy.
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i really liked the song and it was great for ur first one. only criticism is the guitar part but other than that i thot it was awesome.


good job keep making songs.
May 21 2010 11:43PM
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wolvmatt
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Two questions:

What is your band's name? (so that I can find the song, I don't follow links anymore)

How much money does Apple give you per song sold?

May 21 2010 11:44PM
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feddysteeze
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pretty good man keep it up
May 22 2010 9:04AM
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Mr.Plank
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Band name=River Eater
And I believe apple gives us like 70 cents per song sold
May 22 2010 3:58PM
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GolgiApparatus
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thats actually a real good song dude.
May 22 2010 4:04PM
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*simba*
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I like it. Purchased.
May 22 2010 4:22PM
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Mr.Plank
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I love you guys a lot. Homo.
May 22 2010 6:09PM
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attitash46
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i was really expecting this to suck but its super sick!

cant wait to hear more out of you guys

May 23 2010 8:09AM
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84891jnf92048
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not gonna lie. but i didnt think i would like it. but i loved it! great piano, vocals, and I liked the guitar. good luck!
May 23 2010 8:34AM
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*brian
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very sick! the piano and sax parts were awesome, and so were the vocals
purchased

May 23 2010 9:19AM
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Mr.Plank
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Thank you! Here is one more of our songs for free

http://rapidshare.com/files/390739636/Time_Machine.mp3.html
May 23 2010 2:21PM
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Mr.Plank
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we have made 110 dollars! Thank you guys so much! We're gona throw that towards some studio time! Purchase it you like it!


(By the exclamation marks you can tell i'm excited)
May 24 2010 9:53PM
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holyherpbatman
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just bought it OP

your bands actually the best indie band i've heard in awhile good job bro!
May 24 2010 9:56PM
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Arabian.
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I'd also like to say that you shouldn't categorize yourself in the indie genre. It's seriously disrespectful to actual indie artists if you consciously go for an indie sound. If you happen to fall into that genre after you've made the music, good for you, but never try and make your sound fit a certain genre. If you end up being rock, go with it. IF you end up being pop, go with it.
May 24 2010 10:00PM
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84891jnf92048
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just bought it! you guys are good, hopefully this takes you somewhere.
May 24 2010 10:01PM
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eastcoastplanker
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just bought it and downloaded the other ones...its different but dope as hell man
May 24 2010 10:05PM
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Mr.Plank
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I completely 100% agree. To be honest, our first two songs (Misleading, Explosions) are not indie at all. We do consider ourselves as an indie band because our past 4 or 5 songs are more towards the direction we were going for.

heres a more "indie" song.
May 24 2010 10:09PM
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gstaff
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So sick man. Definitely a solid track. Album artwork is dope as hell.
May 24 2010 10:10PM
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Jordan
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Yo, really good stuff.

Mad props - I liked the guitar and the vocals are different - in a good way!


May 24 2010 10:24PM
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fountain.
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that was an amazing song, great work
May 24 2010 10:27PM
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Aaaron.
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i think your guitarists cut could have been cleaner..
not saying that he sucks, i think his feel really fits your type of music, but sweet jesus it's miraculous what an hour a day with a metronome can for to your playing

p.s. vocals were on point
May 24 2010 10:32PM
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Mr.Plank
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yeah his playing is pretty sketchy on the recordings.

These recordings have all been recorded once all the way through (we played one good set of the song live, and the tech guy would do his thing). It's different from a lot of studios today where they record each instrument separately so they have the chance to redo each part if they don't like it. Basically, the studio we recorded at was really low end (50 dollars per song).

If we make a bit more money on this itunes song we're gona try to get into a legit studio!
May 24 2010 10:43PM
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Aaaron.
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hey bro shoot me a PM, i have some tips. gotta log off now but hit me up and we can talk.

May 24 2010 10:44PM
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Mr.Plank
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will do!
May 24 2010 10:48PM
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84891jnf92048
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i know, i have posted twice already but i gott say, today i listened to this song whenever i could, and some of friends listened too, and had nothing but good to say.
May 25 2010 7:23PM
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