interlacing got really bad in some parts, but other than that it was pretty good.
not sure what you edit on, but if its fcp 6 or above you should use the smooth cam filter for your shots and smooth 'em out, that was my only other critique is that some shots were really shaky. or buy a glidecam!
definitely some good shots in there and overall it looks like you're a good filmer. the music didnt work at all for me though and the editing went along with that. it's hard to pick out specific things but it really just didn't flow too well for me. i feel like if you shortened some clips or changed the order it would help. i can't say much because im not any better but i really feel like it was just the editing i wasnt feeling
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