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This is all I've done all day.

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Nathn
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Please give me some feedback on it.

Mar 30 2010 4:40AM
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skiblandford
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it was decent, thought it was a bit repetative. If it were up to me i would add some more beats like a good bass and just change it up a bit add some "surprises"
Mar 30 2010 6:41AM
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LIL_WAT
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That was pretty good man. It reminds me slightly of the Loose Change soundtrack which was (I think) mixed by DJ Skooly (sp)
Mar 30 2010 7:18AM
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Benson23
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all day? , i liked it though good job. At least your doing something semi productive.
Mar 30 2010 9:50AM
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Chompo.
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pretty cool. but i agree that it needed some bass
Mar 30 2010 10:58AM
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SirFryanator
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Nice one dude! I agree, MOAR BASS.
Mar 30 2010 11:11AM
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I_Am_Mod
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mix some rap with it....
Mar 30 2010 11:40AM
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Nathn
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I have a big juicy sub in there haha I'm just gonna have to mess with the frequency until you can hear it as much as you can feel it I guess.
Mar 30 2010 1:37PM
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SirFryanator
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Get some more kick in the snare, boost the mid-low frequencies and the mid-high frequencies and I'm down to do some flowing over this one too. NS collab mixtape? lolz
Mar 30 2010 1:41PM
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yojimbo
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ehhh.
Mar 30 2010 1:42PM
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@fterB@ngz
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i think you should change the tone of the repetitive sound at the beginning sometime. other then that pretty legit
Mar 30 2010 1:55PM
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Nathn
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For sure!
Mar 30 2010 2:05PM
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pussymoneyweed
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thats so sick. deffinitley post it again in this thread when you make the bass stand out. it will deffinitley be on my ipod!
Mar 30 2010 2:11PM
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Nathn
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Glad you like it!
Mar 30 2010 2:15PM
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Shadows
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its 2:20 pm. i just woke up. good work
Mar 30 2010 2:21PM
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nychka
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I would make the snare shorter/ knock harder
Add a bassline
Tweak the main synth/ find diff sound altogether (sounds a lil corny imo)
Maybe think about upping the tempo/ swing quantizing? kinda feels like the beat is dragging, groove isn't in the pocket yet

All just suggestions, good work. What program you runnin?
Mar 30 2010 2:36PM
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Nathn
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Ableton Live 8. Thanks for the criticism too, I'm gonna fix it up quite a bit.
Mar 30 2010 2:41PM
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theabortionator
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I used to use fruity loops and reason and make some stuff. Mostly electro
Mar 30 2010 3:09PM
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gabe.
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to high pitched
Mar 30 2010 3:48PM
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Nathn
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More Recent Version:


Mar 30 2010 3:57PM
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pussymoneyweed
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so sick man where can i dl?
Mar 30 2010 3:59PM
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Spinoza
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i like it,
whatever that new sound you added is (synthesizer or something, i have no idea) it sounds good.

all its lacking now is a rapper and pounding beat
Mar 30 2010 4:00PM
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Nathn
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Bump for new beat.


I have to fix the little solo deal at the end a lot but I don't want to right now.
Apr 10 2010 3:57PM
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Benson23
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How and where did you make that? is there an online beat maker or did you uplaod it to your computer?
Apr 10 2010 4:33PM
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Nathn
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haha no I used Ableton Live for it. It's a DAW.
Apr 10 2010 6:33PM
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will-g
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threads for later
Apr 10 2010 6:37PM
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Nathn
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Apr 15 2010 10:49PM
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