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New Edits--Feedback?

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JackofSpades
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Mar 15 2010 6:37PM
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JackofSpades
Posts: 17 - Karma: -36
here's the other one:
Mar 15 2010 6:38PM
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iannelson
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I don't want to seem like a dick, but the edits were lacking and are you really trying to sell that shit?
Mar 15 2010 8:30PM
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sneezin
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finish a rail, please. it hurts my eyes
Mar 15 2010 9:03PM
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JackofSpades
Posts: 17 - Karma: -36
OK lets ignore my 'selling' for now. What is it lacking and how can it be better?
I sell DVDs of the videos in HD, not this quality and all the videos I have over the year plus bonus stuff.
Mar 15 2010 9:12PM
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iannelson
Posts: 321 - Karma: 43
Then beginnings of the videos have horrid introductions (pictures of the riders and their names)

The tricks were sooooooo repetitive, it was just straight air, after straight air.

I only say one case were someone actually finished a rail.

The tricks were also sloppy as hell, it gets boring to watch.

The slow-mo that went frame by frame was really stupid.

Overuse of slow-mo.

Shaky follow cam (Some shots were good)

The music didn't fit.

The videos didn't "flow".



I would look into buying some better editing software also.




Mar 15 2010 9:37PM
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Tatutu
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Mar 19 2010 9:50AM
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.Max.
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yeah, the level of skiing and editing togeather were subpar, i'm sorry to say. Get interesting angles, no shaky cam's, better music and practice skiing a little more before you try to sell a movie... BY NO MEANS STOP EDITING that is not the point i am trying to get across, keep trying and you will get better, watch some professional edits and you can learn some tricks and how to utalize cutting and slow-mo to your advantage. just keep skiing, snowboarding and editing and i promise you will get better and better at both.
Mar 20 2010 8:19AM
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JackofSpades
Posts: 17 - Karma: -36
OK i am working on some new edits now. I dont have much opportunity to improve the skills of people i film, but i will make it look better. Thanks
Mar 20 2010 3:55PM
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A.Eberhard
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No offense to your buddies or anything, but no matter how good your editing is if the person your shooting can't make it to the end of the rail or throw a 3 your video won't look good.
Mar 20 2010 6:38PM
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JackofSpades
Posts: 17 - Karma: -36
at least i know to cut that now.
Mar 20 2010 9:01PM
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JackofSpades
Posts: 17 - Karma: -36
where was the "slow-mo frame by frame"?
Mar 21 2010 11:52AM
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