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Check my new edit! +K for critiques!

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EthanJPAskier
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Get Money from Ethan Jeremias on Vimeo.

Watch it on vimeo for HD!
Feb 18 2010 10:26PM
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Dr.NS
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wow pretty dope dude

my only advice/ stuff to say:

- what are you editing with? im not sure if you're colour correcting at all, if you are some of the shots look off a bit, and if not, maybe look into it

- maybe don't put so much emphasis with the black parts at the beginning
they seem a little too long if you ask me

- follow caming is deece, maybe get a tripod going and get some nice steady wide shots too

- helmet cam is dope too, worked well

altogether edited pretty well, solid edit
Feb 18 2010 10:40PM
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EthanJPAskier
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Thanks dude, yea looking at it now i definitely need to do some color correction, thanks for the input.
Feb 18 2010 10:46PM
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dreamseller
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dude thats sick! nice vid man! one question, what do you edit with?
Feb 19 2010 2:32AM
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LadySaGa
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i liked how you switched to helmet cam at :30
Feb 19 2010 3:29AM
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EthanJPAskier
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This wass edited with Sony Vegas Pro 9, i usually use premiere pro cs4 but it dosen't like the GoPro HD footage.
Feb 19 2010 6:48AM
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dreamseller
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k thanks man
Feb 19 2010 2:18PM
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EthanJPAskier
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Bump
Feb 22 2010 8:11PM
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grilledsteezeyo
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u got some really nice follow cams...although if ur not using the helmet cam try to get some shots without a lens on a regular cam that way u can get some artsy shots and things like the follow and POV that way youll have a wide variety of shots to look at and it will be even more entertaining to watch
sick edit!
Mar 1 2010 3:44PM
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icantskiiFILM
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yeah it was pretty good. i mean get some more variety in there like ur over using fisheye and it would jus be more appealing to the viewer if u switched up between some long lens and fisheye. what would be dope which u did put in here but like get long lens of someone hittin a jump then switchin to helmet cam. good job for the most part
Mar 1 2010 4:47PM
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A.Eberhard
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Pretty good transitions from P.O.V shots and your other ones. Some of the filming I though just didn't flow well together I don't know that was just me. Like said before some of the colors were off I'm not sure if it was the change in light, all in all I enjoyed it 8/10.
Mar 1 2010 5:14PM
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Allegrath.
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quiet good both skiing and editing wise. the intro was a little long and unnecessary but still enjoyed the whole thing
Mar 1 2010 5:20PM
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nolan.
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+ vibes for bear creek local. dope parks.

+ good skiing

-work on getting some more "entertaining" editing to keep the watcher attached

-don't ride through trees and hit them ;] 

Mar 1 2010 10:20PM
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Chrris
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Better filming would make it more interseting, I think it's all done on a helmet cam? So whomever is filming  should stay back three or four feet further away just to get everything. But other then that it's pretty good.

Mar 2 2010 11:38AM
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rickety_cricket
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You could have got better angles on the rail shots. And try to get closer on the follow cam. But all in all sick edit
Mar 2 2010 11:45AM
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