ok, these are just my thoughts:
for a short video that is somehow supposed to go to the masses, leave all those sub-optimal shots out. dont show another bridge shot when the one before was actually better.
and something i did in the past also but i know its nothing for newschoolers or anyone that is not involved in your crew: forget these surrounding shots. like the zooms when you bring the name, where you spray the bridge and so on. its perfectly fine if you show it only people that you know or that know you guys, but some random fucker like me doesnt want to see that in every second vid.
i feel like you did a great job with that though, but most people will flame you for it cuz its in every edit over and over again.
and work on that grey bar, stuff like that is straight out unacceptable. i know those programs can fuck you up, i had something similar like a week ago, where there was a bar at the right side where everything was a tad darker than the rest, for literally no reason.
and a tip that worked great for me, try stretching the stuff (yes just change the width) so it fits 16:9. idk why but it looks way better.
so no hate, i know my movies arent the shit, but thats just something i experienced.
in all seriousness, i read that 3 times, 1st time i thought what the fuck is he on about, read it again and thought, this fuckbag has to be kidding, read it once more and decided calling you a fuckbag wasnt good enough - sick-as-aids