Storytelling photo crit

i like the idea of the first one, but im not sure what the 2 purple lights under the shoe are, and froma  quick glancei t makes it difficult to see the shoe, like i feel it could be better lit, or even more of a high stiloutte heel instead, is the point trying to show sex for sale?
alcohol one is cool has a good idea, idk maybe a little more contrast or lower light but more directed towards the woman smoking and her facial expression, maybe dripping masscara or what not to hence the distress, and action being shown of the pouring of the alcohol? idk all me just thinking outloud

i think the two purple light are the reflection of the car lights in my lens....but I'm not sure
and yes that one is about sex for sale
i dodged the shoe so it wold stand out more, but i realize it still is too dark....

and the alcohol one, she actually has dripping mascara....and there was meant to be alcohol pouring, but the glass was getting filled quite fast with the photos....
thanks for the input

solution to filling up glass.......drank it! haha
but yea id suggest the 1st one, just maybe think about reshooting it, and maybe look into a more "prostitute" styled or generalized shoe, maybe stripper like shoes, so its clear, and watch those reflected lights, but i like the idea alot and i like the compostion of that pictures, how you set it up, just think the shoe needs to be mroe defined

but alcohol pic, great id just try to show the masscare and pouring then i think your set, solid pictures =D

thanks a lot

the third one is especialy sick!

yea, 1st one, if you could add a bit of fill light to it, it will be sick. #3 make her actually pour the wine in the glass, i like what was said earlier about it. #4, meh, I see where you are going, but to me like looks to fake/staged. the other ones have a lot more going on, however I do like the composition. Do you need 4? I would say just do 3. Ha, if the teacher says you need 4, just tell him/her that Edward Weston said that a series can always be cut down to 3.

I actually don't need 4, but I've already handed in the project, so its to late to take it out....the crit was really for future shoots and for my personal needs :P cause my teacher didn't give any feed back at all, so I was kinda disappointed. I wanted feed back, and I got a little here

thanks for the input, really appreciated :) i'll consider that in my future shoots!