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Critique needed | How is my intro? ++k

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TomasAa
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Skiseason 09 |switchfilms.no from Tomas Aamli on Vimeo.




I like to keep the intro clean and simple, with som chill music. what do you think?
I actually did a lot more colorgrading with magic bullet, but I had to reduse the use of MagicB, because Sony vegas just kept crashing.. Maybie Im canging itfor Premiere pro instead...

+k for legit resonse.
Jul 27 2009 3:53PM
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ski8990
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I like the intro. Simple and nice. Good filming. The transition wasnt real smooth though. It seemed like "oh yeah this is going to be a nice chill movie" and then it just kinda went into not so chill stuff...chea. Overall good job though
Jul 27 2009 6:33PM
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NickSki.
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Pretty sick

Whats the name of the second song?
Jul 27 2009 7:04PM
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MAC.D
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Overall i like it, here are a few things i would change

-A better mood could be set at 1:06 if the guy was laughing or smiling.
-The shot at 1:40 of the lift is sick, but i seems out of place. It might flow better at a different part of the edit(maybe around the 2:35 intro?)

also
-Less film burn.
-Less time lapses of traffic and lifts.
Jul 27 2009 7:24PM
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MAC.D
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i forgot to add that the second song doesnt seem very chill
Jul 27 2009 7:24PM
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T.Rah
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i liked the song combo how it was a bit of everything instead of just all rap u know
Jul 29 2009 1:43AM
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TheUngroomed
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thats what i thought..... pretty good though
Jul 29 2009 11:10AM
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wesley.
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overall i thought that was pretty sick. I liked the time lapse and the inanimite object filming. That stuff always seems to make ski videos and skate videos better.
Jul 29 2009 11:57AM
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connoroh
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you had some really nice colours in a lot of the shots.

The first thing that REALLY stuck out for me was the editing with the crystal castles song. You should have kept the edit trickless untill the vocals come in.
Seeing the frontflip off the box was really strange to have when the song is just warming up.
Jul 29 2009 1:31PM
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OscarTheGrouch
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i like the intro but the transition from the intro to the actually skiing seemed weird. if i were you i wouldn't change the song during the transition. maybe find a song that goes with both the intro and the skiing?
Jul 29 2009 2:41PM
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mcnamarskiez
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overall i must say i think you did a great job with the cinemetography, however transitions are what was really bugging me. they just seemed a bit to fast and flashy for the mood that the movie was setting. but you had some excellent shots and i think the soundtrack was pretty legit. good job man!
Aug 13 2009 12:20AM
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t3hb055
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Holy god! That was beautiful! I loved it, I would so buy that. Nice job, love the mellow intro.
Aug 13 2009 12:41AM
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cultrara
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that was great, nice angles
Aug 13 2009 10:12AM
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C.Wood
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i like it
but like tha first guy said the transition wasn't the greatest
but very edit though
Aug 13 2009 10:44AM
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4ReeL_
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it was good,


but shouldn't an intro grab the viewers attention right away? I think you had good shots but the song was not good for an intro.
Aug 13 2009 6:07PM
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