make your cuts tighter,
don't zoom in post production unless its nessecary, or your working with a HD camera.
all zooms were done in editing and way to fast.
you were trying too hard basically.
pick a song that fits the day, not one your buddy showed you "bro check this you GOTTA use it for one of your edits!" none of that shit. you say nah i got my own steeze.
have someone film it, not all tripod shots, and if you do use all tripods then set up different angles. if you do use the same one make sure its for a purpose such as the ones used in this edit i made recently